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Submitted by jbrar2 on May 17, 2006
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We have come a long way since human beings first crawled out of caves.
Reading this statement makes it very difficult to determine what the core subject of this thesis is. “We have come a long way…” can be considered to be the subject, but how have we come a long way? This statement proposes too many questions which are essential questions to be answered in a thesis. Another problem that will arise with using such an ambiguous thesis statement is an essay lacking in proper thematic structure.
Although the statement itself is brief enough to be held in the mind while writing a paper, the subject of this thesis is very broad. It does not answer the five basic questions which would help limit the subject to a more specific focus.
Who? Who is “We”?
What aspects? What aspects of “us” have come a long way?
Where? Where have “we” come a long way? (In Canada? England? Africa?)
When? When did human beings first crawl out of caves?
How? How have “we” come a long way?
Even though the claim could be proven, it would be very difficult to do research on such a topic considering that the subject of interest is so widespread. The subject of this thesis is very ambitious, it is so ambitious the it would definitely be a challenge to prove this statement in the time and space typically available for an essay.
Taken as a whole, I would definitely label this thesis statement as a weak statement.
I would re-write this thesis statement as follows:
Canadians have come a long way with our cutting edge technology since 1876, when Alexander Graham Bell invented his telephone.
Princess Diana was murdered by the Royal Family.
This thesis statement is very unclear. The Royal Family as a whole is being accused of murdering Diana in this thesis; it does not specify who took part in the murder. This statement also leaves out many critical questions that...
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