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Checkpoint . Different Kinds Of Messages Part 2

Subject: River View Plaza Break Room
Date: Friday, 11 2008 6:33 (CST)
From: Brian P (brianp@email.phoenix.edu )
To: Trisha Navaroli ( tnav@email.phoenix.edu )

Trisha:

I would like to talk to you about the break room that I am going to be proposing for the River View Plaza on Monday. I am doing this presentation so that I can get a nicer, newer and larger lunch room for everyone to use. I am planning on doing the room on the 2nd floor because I think that this would be the most convenient for everyone in the building. I am wanting to do a room that has machines for food, ice cream, snacks and drinks of all kinds. Let me know if you have any ideas that you may have to add to this venture.

Thank you,
Brian

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Subject: River View Plaza Break Room
Date: Friday, 11 2008 6:33 (CST)
From: Brian P ( Brianp@email.phoenix.edu )
To: John Smith ( Jsmith@email.phoenix.edu )

John:
I would like to talk to you about some more of the ideas that I have for the break room that could go into the River View Plaza. I know that if I can get some ideas bounced off of you that it can be better. I am going to be doing a presentation on Monday and will be talking about it being on the second floor with many features. I was thinking about some snack machines, food machines, ice cream machines, and another machine with different drinks ranging from soda, fruit juices, coffee water, etc…. There would also be a toaster, a microwave and a toaster oven for people to use as well. I like the ideas that you have about the sinks and making sure there is enough counter space for the people to prepare there food if they need to. I want to say thank you for that and it will be mentioned on Monday. Please let me know if you have any more great ideas that may help me get this approved.
Thanks again,
Brian

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I think that the way I wrote the two different emails to the members on the committee are both informative and positive. The one on top, I tried to stay formal and...